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you and i , to me, were like poetry

YOU AND I TO ME WERE LIKE POETRY
WE FLOWED, NOT ALWAYS RHYMING BUT RHYTHMIC TOGETHER
NO ROUGH SPOTS, NO REDRAFTING ALWAYS RIGHT THE FIRST TIME
ALWAYS LIVING IN AND FOR AND TO THE MOMENT, ALWAYS
NEVER RESISTANT OF ONE ANOTHER, NEVER WRONG TO ONE ANOTHER, EVER
LETTING OURSELVES BE THAT WHICH WE WERE AND ARE AND WOULD BE
AND COULDN'T WE BE ONE WHEN WE WERE ON?
AND WE WERE ON, NEVER OFF, WEREN'T WE?
WHEN WE LOVED IT WAS ALWAYS LOVE IN THE MAKING
AND MAKING LOVE WAS ALWAYS LOVEMAKING
NEVER FAKING OR TAKING BUT A WHOLE LOTTA SHAKIN' GOIN' ON
AND SHARING
AND CARING, CAUSE YOU CARE AND SHARE BEYOND COMPARE
AND YOUR SOUL, NOT QUITE BARED
IS TRUE IN ITS CONTENT AND UNDERSTANDING AND WISDOM
I ROSE TO LOVE WITH YOU, WHICH MADE ME FALL INTO YOU,
YOURSELF
AND BECAUSE OF THAT YOU ARE A PART OF ME
A BEAUTIFUL PART
THANK YOU

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  • Miss Kristy
    November 15, 2007
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    WOW!

    this is such a beautiful write!!
    your in the finals!
    good luck!
    x x x