I hate your fuckin guts
and i hope you fuckin die
your fucked in the head
you wouldnt know up from fuckin down
I hate everything you do
i dont laugh at your jokes
thier fuckin clown shoes
you stand on the corner
to do another trick
what i want to do is set you in fire with my fuckin bic
what the fuck is wrong with you?
A contest entry
- The Magical Word of F*ck :) by ultimate beluga.
450 points, ended November 14, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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um... right. i think youve used fuck a little much, and maybe the whole thing is a little simplistic and contrived? in a way, it kinda sounds to me like youve got a lot of real emotion, but you werent entirely sure how to put it together with such emotion. if that makes sense!
anyway, i did really like a few lines form this, thanks heaps for entering! -
who's this about...?...
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