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Exclamation of Feelings.

Let them ask me what I did,
and I will proudly tell them all.
I loved you with all I had.
Gave you everything I could to make you happy.
Time meant nothing to me and how I felt for you.
There was you and there was me,
Everbody else was just a blurred dream.
My love my life and my dreams come true.
They are all what I see in you.
So let them come and let them ask.
For you my love are the only one that matters.
Until the end of time I love you darling.
My Tiger you are my world and for you I live.
and for you would die...

Author notes

Eh, maybe some of you will understand I havnt written in so long due to class. Im so inlove with my Tiger I cant think straight or make things sound right...

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  • Asylaarix
    January 19, 2008
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    Will

    I loved this piece ... you always put your full self into your writes ... and every time ... it always comes out so perfect ... you are such a romantic ... I've always loved that about you ... keep smiling my love ... and know that in the end ... Everything will be okay ... I love you

    ♥CC♥
  • sweetpea0611
    November 26, 2007
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    americanrebel

    Hey bro. This is really good. I love ya bro.


  • ScarletLetter
    November 17, 2007

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    it's perfect

    there's no need for orginization, rhyme, or explination. It came from your heart,
    and it is simply flawless.


  • Yuli2006
    November 14, 2007

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    Will this is sweet... : )

    I'm so happy that some one makes you this happy. Its a very good write I personaly love it! Brings back the memory of the old William. Thorns and all lol.

    lots love- Yuliana


  • She Hides Her Pain
    November 14, 2007

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    Liked it

    William,


    That is how I feel about my Druid Spencer. I love him so much. I am happy that you and Kristine are so in love.


  • poeticweaver silver member
    November 14, 2007

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    Awesome!

    A piece well versed with lines of undying love that would die only for love.. Hope that makes sense.. but your poetic piece is a wonderful read. Thanks for sharing here.

    Peace, Timothy

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