I swear, I’ve seen this before
The same old streets
I swear, this time around
I’ll never stop
My god, I think we’re going somewhere
We drive, without meaning
We’d stop at nothing
I think we’re going somewhere
This time around
I think we’re on to something
Author notes
{I think we're going somewhere}
A contest entry
- Lyrical Inspirations by Emm Jayy.
525 points, ended November 17, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Here's my lullaby: Pray for rain, lose your name and watch all your dreams fall through...hush now, don't you cry...
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I like the idea of it. But it seems unfinished, like there's more to the story that you're leaving out. Maybe... it's supposed to be that way? That you're going somewhere, yet you don't know where?
Still.. good job and good luck!
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spanks thee!
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doesn't seem finished...but it's good, i like it
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Toadally agree-ify with thesh.
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with which parts?
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thanks thee!
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