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Brotherhoodless is the cruelest




Never think it's faking ....
When we tell you we love you ...
Never think we're dying ...
Even that they have to go ...

Never think we're faking ....

Then she told me you are the one ...
It Sounded like you're so close to her ...
Now I tell you, you're the one ...
It sounded like you'd passed in my heart ...

Brotherhoodless is the cruelest ...
When you feel that you're alone ...
They don't care if you cut your wrest...
It's not the end of world again ....

Never think we are faking ....

Then she told me you are the one ...
It sounded like you're so close to her ...
Now I tell you , you're the one ...
It sounded like you'd passed in my heart ..

this is for a sister that i love too much ... and ... Thank you seether band that your song ( Driven Under helped me in this )

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  • xrated-candy
    May 31, 2008
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    this was great! just had to let you know!


  • Insane-dolly
    January 23, 2008
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    Simply Amazing loved it and you lots

    ...Gina


  • Cherryberryboy
    January 14, 2008
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    I like the style and the poem. Thanks for the read.


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    January 8, 2008

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    i liked this poem you did great i was happy to read from you have done it in awhile my fault, keep it up love lots, xx


  • xXxCry-HavocxXx
    November 14, 2007
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    awsome write


  • Stormy Days
    November 14, 2007
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    very good

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