The door slams
My heart closes
Tears fall
Silently, alone, I weep
You were the one
I thought would save me
Rescue me from loneliness
Teach me how to live again
I was wrong
I gave you my love
I gave you my body
Again and again
You took me, possessed me
Made me feel alive
Made me feel loved
I thought I was safe
You took me to the edge
My mind left reeling
Every time you held me
Every time you caressed me
I longed for you
Your fingers
Your mouth
Your body
I ached for you
I arched for you
I came for you
You took me lovingly
You took me hungrily
You deceived me easily
Then you walked away from me
And the game is over
You had your fun
You had me
Now I am left with nothing
And my eyes bleed tears
Straight from my shattered heart
Again, I am alone
Author notes
Option 4 (quote) "And my eyes bleed tears straight from my shattered heart..."
Lost Love & Heartbreak
It's all about thinking you are loved.
Believing you have a future with the one you love, then being smashed apart when you find out that to them, it was just a game.
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is so sad....
I really liked it...a lot though! Thank you for your entry. A sorrowful tale in a beautiful format! 
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Very nice poem and i enjoyed it goo luck
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This was a wonderful take on the prompt. I really enjoyed this beautiful piece of work! Thank you so much for sharing it in my contest.
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I ached for you, I arched for you
That's not bad at all.
How about
I longed for you, I lunged for you? -
Oh dear, that is sad.
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Judge Says
YAY!! You give me hope that I will find a winner! You have brighted my sad day by writing this wonderful poem. I love it! Good Luck!
~Dommi -
I like it, the story is really good, it doesn't seem like the poem I would've written from the quote, I would've made it a lot darker... But this isn't about what I would do lol
You did a good job writing this, I like it...
Thanks for entering round 2 and good luck! =)
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