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Me...In a Different State of Mind

Images
Disturbing
Pain
Undeserving

Wishing
Waiting
Illusions
Fading

Nightfall
Insistence
Fearing
Resistance

Love
Resounding
Hate
Surrounding

Speeches
Flattered
Hopefulness
Shattered

Parody
Goodbye
Numb
Sigh

Fingers
Breath
Suffocating
Death

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  • Lowell Poe
    January 31, 2008

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    I have to be honest,
    when I saw the style I almost didn't read it.
    I'm not a fan of this type of writing.
    But then I thought of the writer, and had confidence to take the chance.
    The succession of words are brilliant.
    It made a tapestry of a story, the likes that I still can't believe. I now realize, from this unbelievable writer, that this is actually a very difficult style to write in. Much like the old coffee house days when beatniks such as Kerouac would sashay in while someone played the bongos. This is just one of the many reasons I admire you as a talent.

    MANY MANY BLESSINGS GYPSY,
    LOWELL POE.


  • Chrissi
    November 27, 2007
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    this is awesome wife i love it!!!