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Horse ride

Wrecked boat leads me to the shore.
Wind blows with a sigh.
roses and jasmine Scents-
Cream with  moonlight

Slowly and slowly she appears
With a white velvety horse beside.
Parted red lips shines moonlight
Or , a smile ?
Stretching hands
An invitation to ride,
( a needle  in the magnetic field)
attracts me to the horse.

Riding slowly with she behind
harness bells ring,
slowly it sounds  and SOUNDS.
Lips pour  red wines.
velvety hairs (of horse also )
feels the fly and sparkling
of the whity moonlight.

Then the string is taken-
from my hand .
letting the horse fly,
to the castle of clouds.
sighs and murmur of of wind
around .
knowing not what
I lay on the horse
With bluish sky above.
Stars hiding  smiles behind clouds
( of jealous)
Seeing stars in her eyes .
(Let me forget the wrecked boat.)

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 14, 2007
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    This is very nice I wish you the best of luck in my contest Thank you for entering