As the sunsets and darkness looms
An estranged affair is witnessed
The lord of day approaches the goddess of night
He baths her in his magnificence
Setting her gown alight
All she does is smile wearily shaking her head at the sight
Her hand reaches out gently taking his chin
He rests his head in it while slowly receding his brilliance
Allowing himself to be calmed by her
Allowing her to rule his sky again
Author notes
I don't often do this, and I'm pretty sure it's a load of crap enjoy
Persian Karkadann
A contest entry
- Rule by the People round two by star wars fanatic.
450 points, ended March 24, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh no no no.. not crap! Rather spellbinding in fact! Beautiful choice of words and it very much fitted the picture I went and had a look at!
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Quite an interesting write little brother ... I much rather like the flowing imagery
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Manda
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I haven't seen the picture but this paints beautiful imagery and has a very soft and serene voice in its words...
I really, really like it. It's beautiful.
I'll give you a load of crap
Hope you guys are doing fantastic!
♥
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It's not a load of crap. lol It's very nice. I like the way you captured the pic literally, but still gave it some imaginitive aspects. Nice work, poet!
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its not a load of crap, you have such an amazing gift. your writing is outstanding.
dont put your work down, its some of the finest work AP has on offer.
i love you...
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love you babe
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