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I Miss You



This well
waters my eyes when heart in care turns on its side
          breathing the breath within.

There is silence then.

The emptiness riddles ache.
My core set to stone amid the ice of winter glaze. 
My motions though routine,
          feel no spark.

Agony rests in reach of you.

Time has taken you to another place;
a place outside of normal.

But still I am still and cold.

My pain is felt in guilt for having it,
and yet,
          I cannot help but miss you.






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  • Fug-azi
    November 15, 2007
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    Beauty in words


  • xxAshleyNicolexx
    November 14, 2007
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    LOVE IT keep up to great work


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    very touching!

    this feels bittersweet, but it's done with expertise
    that only a gifted poet can pen! good luck in the contest!

  • Rowan gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    how sad. Mournful missing, but lovely in words.