To many emotions,
Run through my head.
But one stands out,
The one I dread.
So much hate,
And anger around.
That’s what keeps my life,
Forever bound.
I cover my feelings,
By the smile I fake.
Hoping things will get better,
The more pills I take.
Getting angry at some,
To try to express.
The inner most thoughts,
That I do compress.
Why can’t I be real?
To all that I meet?
‘Cause of all the judgment
That makes me retreat.
Author notes
thanks to fallenstar588 for the new name
and let me no what u think of the poem, tis a bit the same as most of my writing, *sigh*
Please tell me what you think
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awsome, this poem is like a device (sp?) painting! i truley love it!
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awesomme. congadulations. your rhyme skeem is prefect as well as the emotion comprised amoung the words.
You truely do have an amazing gift you know that?
Sad though it is, hate is our strongest of all emotions...some people use it everyday, almost as if it is a life force...livibg each moment just to be spitefull and in order to hurt somebody or anybody else.
A good write.congradulations again.
XOXO
Mike
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WOW...I'm totally reading about myself...you've certainly captured the pain and isolation in this poem
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WOW pretty good
Wow a smashing and earth-shaking write NOT EXAGGERATING..it seems like this poem caught me off guard..i was writing my other poems and had the writing mode still ..so this poem surprised me because wow..i fell like a landslide ..i tripped...because your talent just made my jaw drop ...wow...this write is just i want to find a long word i haven't used..erm..this write is SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL..there ya go!
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love it and can totally relate...
You rock!
Love you heaps and heaps.
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thanks sis!!! so glad u liked it... its not my best but it shows how i feel.
love you very muchly
xoxoxoxo
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For a title, Unavoidalbe Compression maybe. I just think it sounds kinda cool. I like the message that this poems sends. I know the feeling thinking pills can fix anything. I've tryed taking that belief to an extreme... not a good idea. Anyways it was nice to read something of yours again... I was begining to wonder where you went.
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thanks heaps... glad you liked it, and sorry you can relate to it
yea i havent been doing much posting lately, because everything i right i dont seem ot like, but i thought id better post some anyway. lol
thats a totally awesome name do u mind if i steel it?? thanks heaps
love you always HB
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Good to read something from you again Hope you are ok? Love you
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thanks alot for the comment on my poem... im ok, i rote that one i while ago. found it and thought i'd post it...
love you heaps AP mum
xoxoxoxox
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