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Dawning ...

I wake slow to the sound
of the Mockingbird’s song
slowly sifting through
night’s swift dreams,
where your lone
shadow lingers
awaiting the dawn of
inspiration’s sweet light.



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Author notes

... I often watch the day dawn from my porch overlooking the river. Many a poem comes from the thoughts that I pondered over during my dreams.

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  • Utok Bulinaw
    November 16, 2007

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    Fresh and heavenly. Poems come from different things around us and it is the beautiful sight that often inspires a poet. I wish I have a porch overlooking the river. Again, this is lovely. Thank you for entering.


  • leo2
    November 15, 2007

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    Oh morning is my favorite time of day. And, I too, find inspiration in those quiet moments alone with my thoughts and coffee. Best of luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

  • Bad Bill
    November 14, 2007
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    This is as lovely and fresh as the dawn you write about. A definite pleasure to read.

    Bill