..: Suicide :..
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Pain, that’s hurting [forever]
xX Suicide Xx
Forever .h.u.r.t.i.n.g.?
That’s pain…
And ~Suicide~
Author notes
i dont rememebr what its called, but there is a type of poem that is the same backwards and forwards... so i gave it a go.
what do you think? its harder than it looks
Please tell me what you think
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L-O-V-E it
I love it . . . i could really feel your pain through writing this , you must have penned this with a lot of thought and frustration . . . - page
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Hmmmn...
I'd like to see another attempt at this style with a different subject. When you write about suicide, I'm distracted from your art because all that I can think of is that I don't like associating you with it.
Have a Cool Yule, lil' sis.
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cool
i like it its somethin new and dont c much of new and different is good if u look har enofe at it they say dont judge somthin by it's cover.. this is vergod and he ret ur oems are 2 great job -
I don't mean to be rude but I didn't really like it although I love the structure (reflection it really does make you think)
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Shit.
thats amazing.
I love it sis!!!
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thanks... i didnt like it, but it was a new style... glad u liekd it
take care of urself sweetie
love you, peace out
xoxoxoxo
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awesome job!
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thanks i am glad u liked it
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Well done. I can't remember what this form is called either, but it must be hard to make it read the same both ways. Well done
Love you
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thanks.... i dunno if i like it much, its a bit of a strange style but i like trying new things.
love you heaps
xoxoxox
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