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Little Angel Broken Heart

Broken little angel
Falling from a star
Tear drops falling
Hitting my face like rain
Looking up to see you
Your eyes deep oceans of blue
You have no words
But those teary mirrors tell all
Love was broken
Your heart was torn
Blood stains your dress
I reach out to hold you
Your body starts to quake
Frightened as a child
A piercing Scream you make
And then you fly away
The wounds too deep
Even for my Sympathy

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  • mmook
    November 14, 2007
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    sweet but sad ...thanks for sharing


  • Forgotten Garden
    November 14, 2007

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    I love this..It's deep, raw, sympathetic, compassionate, hurtful, and above all...BEAUTIFUL!!! One of the best I've read in a long time! Thank you for featuring it!


  • Hashnah Sheviatte
    November 14, 2007

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    "Frightened as a child,A piercing Scream you make...."
    You have a great thought...
    I just want to know what gives you this kind of feeling?