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Rotating Hope

Curtains open  

 

~ everyone watches ~


beauty standing tall faces all aglow
troubles of yesterday fade away


Standing ovation...

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Word Prompt : Rotating Hope : Five Lines

A contest entry

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  • Luminescence
    February 26, 2008

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    I asked for a depressing sad poem and this wasn't.... good poem but not depressing sorry.

    Thank you for entering my contest and better luck next time.
    ~Lumin


  • leander Moderators member
    December 4, 2007

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    ooh, those nerve-wrecking moments before you need to go on stage... well, before you need to perform actually (or right after )
    thanks for entering this one too sweety!
    Leander


  • Barbara gold member
    November 15, 2007
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    interestng poem with great imagery...very vocal for so few lines.


  • Namita
    November 15, 2007

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    standing ovation... great write!! Congrats on the gold!!

    ~Candy


  • doyouloveit
    November 15, 2007
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    you did awesome with this prompt i like your poem very much congrats on the gold


    • Kari gold member
      November 15, 2007
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      Thank you so much for your comment. I really appreciate it


  • freespirit51
    November 14, 2007

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    My dear frind you have done a great job with this one. I really enjoyed this piece alot. It is almost like the circle of life, but this is of hope instead. Great work. I loved the whole piece. You deserved the gold.


    • Kari gold member
      November 14, 2007
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      Thank you so much for your comment. I really am glad that you enjoyed it


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    Nice,

    You captivate the reader in me with such detailed imagery.. Congrates on the Gold as well. This was truly creative as you weave your words together so well. Excellent!

    Peace, Timothy


    • Kari gold member
      November 14, 2007
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      Thank you Timothy I am so glad that you liked it


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    November 14, 2007
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    So very well done. Deserving of the trophy.
    Soulful Woman


    • Kari gold member
      November 15, 2007
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      Soulful Woman,
      Thank you so much for your comment and kind words. I appreciate them


  • suseann
    November 14, 2007
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    Clearly you've captured the rotation in hope of the human experiance. Well versed.


    • Kari gold member
      November 15, 2007
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      Thank you so much suseann...I am so glad you liked it


  • eyesofanangel524
    November 14, 2007

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    Wow..incredible take on the prompt. Creative without a doubt. Imagery well crafted. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Lyre-Bird-
    November 14, 2007

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    Thank you for entering the contest!!!!
    Excellent take on the promt.......
    This is really a unique piece.....
    love where this has gone

    best of luck to you!!!
    Tracey


    • Kari gold member
      November 15, 2007
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      Tracey,
      I am so very honored that you liked it. Thank you a lot for the gold. It means the world to me


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    wow this is a wondeful write for so few words. penned with the strength and power
    well done and best of luck in the contest


  • Balthazar
    November 14, 2007
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    Wow!

    Few words but wondeful poem. I really enjoyed it. You get 3 from me. keep it on

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