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The Lone Star

Darkness is swirling,
ebony mist abound.
Not one single light,
is there to be found.

Till you see it shining,
a lone solitary star.
Sending out golden rays,
that glow from afar.

Seeping the colour back into your day,
keeping evils transgression far, far away.

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Prompt is: silver linings in clouds of doom

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 28, 2007
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    Excellent Writing -- Enjoy your Rhyming Poetry

    Must have been Mars or, more probably, Venus.
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  • leander Moderators member
    December 4, 2007

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    I actually enjoyed reading this little snippet here - very well done!
    Thank you for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck!
    Leander


  • Grey Mouser
    November 14, 2007

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    A light that shines just for you. Wonderfully done. Thanks for entering the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • CherryOnTop
    November 14, 2007

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    This is powerful and awesome. i love the rhyme and the flow. My favorite line is"keeping evils transgression far,far away" Beautiful!!