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Masked Voice

Cameo glass,
distracts attention.
Adherence,
the spoken word.
Masked Voice.

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  • Grey Mouser
    December 2, 2007

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    Very profoundly written, where the visual distraction takes precedence over the communication that is the heartblood. Well done piece.

    Mouser


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 20, 2007

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    Very deep and thought provoking in so few words...you have given them a voice and strngth.
    Excellent as always.

    Love,
    sis


  • Pisces Pieces
    November 17, 2007

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    How very thought provoking...

    Sometimes our true voice is masked by a spoken word that does not, in fact, need to be said at all.

    As always...brilliant.

    ♥
    Michele


  • Lyre-Bird-
    November 14, 2007

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    Thank you for entering the contest!!!!
    Good take on the prompt....
    although this is a short piece, you have choosen your words well
    well written

    best of luck to you!!!
    Tracey

  • Kari gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    The vocab in this piece was really good, I like it a lot. Also the imagery was good. I wish you the best of luck in the contest

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