With my finger, I dry the tear running down your cheek.
My eyes look deeply into yours, telling me without speaking.
Your hair softly flows down the side of your face like silk.
Your parted lips are pleading with me to be gently kissed.
My lips meet yours and my tongue slips in for a taste.
Your warm embrace tells me you are ready, wanting more.
I lay you down on the bed, you look back at me smiling.
I straddle you and pull off your shirt, my heart pounding.
I pull mine off over my head, you’re enjoying what you see.
Your hands roam freely on my chest, the sensation swelling.
You pull me down on top of you, our lips again do meet.
Removing your bra, my hands gently fondles your breast.
I pull on your erect nipples and my lips kiss your neck.
I whisper in your ear how good you feel and how I want you.
You softly moan as my tongue encircles your nipples.
My hand glides down across you to unbutton your jeans.
Your hips rise, your back arches, awaiting my touch.
I slide your jeans down off your feet, feeling your warmth.
Again we caress and my kisses explores more of you.
Sliding down on you I find the tender feel of lace panties.
My hand slips under and I gently caress your mound.
Slow rotating movements, teasing you into erotic pleasures.
My finger presses into a delightful creamy wet fold.
Your legs spread apart, I feel you shiver to my touch.
I remove your panties with my teeth past your knees
Past your ankles. I passionately kiss the inside of your thighs.
With my thumbs I gently spread open your heavenly crown.
My tongue ravishes your flowering bud. Each lick consumes.
Your hands press on the back of my head as I enter you.
My tongue rotating, tasting, slipping deeply into your canal.
You lift yourself up to greet my plunging inside of you.
With my shaft now fully hardened to all of our foreplay.
You reach down and teasingly place it into pleading lips.
The penetration enters you, sliding into its rightful place.
Our moans fill the room, our lustful passion at full pace.
Uncontrollable we pull on each other, your hands pressing me.
My hands on your waist pulling you in deeper and faster.
The feel of being inside you, thrusting, slamming, filling you.
Sweat dripping off our skin, intermixing with our juices.
The vibrating, tightening on each other, wanting satisfaction.
In unison our release ignites our inner screams of desire.
My ejaculation drains deep within your pulsating cavern.
I collapse onto top of you. Both of us gasping for air.
I leave myself inside of you, enjoying how you feel.
My hands find your face and I whisper I love you.
I kiss you, squeezing you, holding you in sweet caress.
In a list
A contest entry
- It's sexytime (Erotic Writes) Now accepting PREWRITES!! by Poetic-Goddess.
475 points, ended November 25, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awwwwww
This is just beautiful. Totally could of teased a little longer but over all it was sexy, and very loving. Great read to put a smile on my face.
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I'm glad I could put a smile on your face.
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sweet, and sexy, nice read
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Thank you for reading and commenting on Sweet Caress. It was a joy to write this one. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Joy for joy, a fantastic worded poem that leaves me wanting more of your words. So sensual and loving too.
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting on this write. It is appreciated.
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WOW!! I AM KIND OF SPEECHLESS..LOL WHAT A PASSIONATE WRITE .. SO FULL OF GREAT WRITTEN IMAGERY..CONGRATS ON THE HONORABLE WINNING
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Thanks for reading and commenting on this write. It was a joy doing it.
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WOW!
I am always fasinated by what you can come up with and the images you create in my mind...this is so hot and sensual. I loved it!
Jenn
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Thank you for reading and commenting Jenn. I really appreciate it.
Lots of love,
Charley
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This is so beautiful and sensual. It had erotic imagery and yet was still expressed in a very sensual and passionate way. Congrats on the honorable winning, though I think this piece deserved gold. Keep writing.
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Thank you Haley for reading and your kind comment on my poem, it is greatly appreciated.
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Thanks for entering
Such a sweet and caring write
Incredible!!!
This left me at a lost for words
Good luck!!
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Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the HM, its appreciated.
Lots of love,
Charley
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This is so sweet and caring
The emotion is so intense of two people in total complete love
Such passion
an incredible job
Your writes always leave me in awe
How you wind your words and such
Your an excellent poet!
Keep up the good work
Beks
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Thank you Beks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed. I really appreciate hearing your thoughts on my writes. Thanks again
lots of love,
Charley
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Simple & Sweet!
Aghast I am so very impressed with the emotion of this piece! I have a Computer that can speak what I highlight, and what I heard was sheer passion, given to a perfect release... Way to go, I cannot write with this much reality... I am in awe of you, and your talent!
~ James ~
P.S. I only have 2 points, or I would give you 3 applause's! Sorry!
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting it is greatly appreciated.
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Amazing Charley. Absolutely amazing. I am speachless and very horny. hehe. You are a very talented writer and I hope you never put that pen down. Good luck with the contest my friend. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!! AHH I'm so horny!!!!!
I love you,
Guin
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Thank you Guin for reading and commenting. I always love hearing from you.
Love ya,
Charley
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Amazing Charley. Absolutely amazing. I am speachless and very horny. hehe. You are a very talented writer and I hope you never put that pen down. Good luck with the contest my friend. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!! AHH I'm so horny!!!!!
I love you,
Guin
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