Follow the flow of misery
A terrible path to destiny.
Intervene somehow dear Lord,
Take me & keep me from suffering more.
Heavens path is at the end of Earth’s tears
Author notes
prompt: Crying Path
(LUBSVM)
A contest entry
- ~PIF~ 5 LINES by Lyre-Bird-.
530 points, ended November 14, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Profound and well said..We all need Divine Intervention to keep us going...love it...All the best!
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Thank you for entering the contest!!!!
Great take on the prompt.....
Within 5 lines sooo much sad & such a mixture of emotion released.....
best of luck to you!!!
Tracey -
It's always desperation that leads us to our knees. I think you did a good job on the prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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This is so awesome to me. "Heavens path is at the end of Earth's tears." Nothing else needs to be said.
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a strong and powerful take on the prompt which really deepens it with meaning and emotion
well done and best of luck mom
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Trust in Him baby, beyond every storm is a shining sun to dry the tears and warm the heart once again. I am here for you always. Love you...Scott
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