When you face a loner's wrath
And find you have nothing to lose
You decide you have to choose
Either way you could drink the booze
While walking down the "Crying Path".
A contest entry
- ~PIF~ 5 LINES by Lyre-Bird-.
530 points, ended November 14, 2007, 7 entries
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Everyday life
These are the words of everyday life here. Some people just need to drink their sorrows away. Great work!
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cute. really good!
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Thank you for entering the contest!!!!
A good take on the prompt...
plain, simple and thoughts easily expressed
well done
best of luck to you!!!
Tracey -
good piece
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lol drinking the booze while you're walking down the crying path does help
when the hangover is done maybe it'll all be done or perhaps it might start all over again lol good job and good luck 
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