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When the night falls, which shall I be,
Pick a number and let us see.
Tonight I am the fire engine red,
Long curls falling from my head.
Lingerie already half stripped,
Passion from me dripped.
As I set in motion, ready to play,
You heed another direction, are you okay?
Within in a moment, your eyes gleam,
A crazy look that made me want to scream.
Tongue plays along my lips,
Hands sweetly caress my hips.
You’re ready now, to be teased.
And I am willing, to definitely please.
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Mouth entwines with yours, viciously,
Embracing me maliciously.
Tearing at my nightie,
You stripped me free.
Skin ripping nicely,
As your nails trailed me;
Fingertips dipped in crimson flow,
To my lips I taste it, I’m ready to go.
Finish off my pleasuring treat,
As I trail my tongue, from your neck to feet.
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Within your passionate tongue licking,
You chasing the shadows got me reminiscing.
Tongue against my stomach, hands on my waist,
Sweet ecstasy building, its written on your face.
Fangs starting showing, I tried to keep composed,
But the woman in me wanted to be exposed.
Trying real hard, not to let you see,
The other woman I wanted to be.
As he hit my core,
And sucked a little more.
My nails started digging deep,
Within your skin my passion seeps.
Trickling of your inner glow,
Cherry tips just for show.
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Pain stricken face I see,
Of the luscious form lying below me!
Tracks designed from your chest
Toward the south my tips did rest.
Hands gripping and iron rod,
Reeling with passion I slightly nod.
Then lean in for dinnertime,
Neck exposed in the nick of time.
Tongue tasting his sweet flesh,
Fangs sank it, his hands against my breast.
Sucking in all I could possibly do,
Blood dripping off my chin, as you taste it too.
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Now I own the man before me,
Sweet sacrifice, he soothed my need.
I mount and ride, and thrust,
Like raging waters the dam will bust.
Nails claiming the man inside,
Forever scarred from tonight.
But when he’s finished, he will disappear,
Until the next full moon, when my twin reappears.
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Author notes
picture ...take it where you want
(LUBSVM)
A contest entry
- catch me in the DARKness if you can by theDARK1.
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this is very good indeed. so tantlizing and tasty im not sure where to start. the way you portraye dthem all... oh how i wanted to see. teh display of how you seduced him and then took what was yours. nicely done.
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did not want to stop reading, very enticing piece.
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wow. I'm speechless. This is dark and erotic ... lots of vivid images to hold the readers attention. I just have one small critique, and that's in line 9 of the 1st section. You have "within in" and it sounds kind of redundant. ?
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wow this is a creative and dark write which holds alot of imagery within it
well done and best of luck mom
much love always
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Beautifully written yet again baby, you do very well at these dark writes. Got a thing for Vampires this week do you? Is that Merlynn rubbing off on you???
Love you baby...Scott 
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definitely creative and stylish with your writing. i found it to be rather delicious for the reader in me, DRAK.
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