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20/20 Vision

 

 

 

when I look into your eyes
I see forever waiting there
you're my future,

my past, my present,
my everything...

 

 

 

 

 

 

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The Rapturous Twenty

Telling him "I love you"...in 20 words

In a list

A contest entry

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 15, 2007

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    That's a heaping spoon of love, wowowowowow thanks for your entry into my contest lol


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    November 13, 2007

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    Yet another beautiful write sis Well done and good luck in this contest

  • Bel Ange silver member
    November 13, 2007

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    Thet definatly say it in 20 words
    you hav put ur emotion well in to this poem, foever is a very lon time but never is evn longer.
    good job, thanks for sharin it here wit us an good luck in teh contest

    bel ange
    jan