Oh Lord it's hard to not grumble
when you're defect in every way
I can't bear to wait in the dole queue
cause it gets bloody longer each day.
So toe me and then shove me
and just see if I give a damn...
Oh Lord it's hard to not grumble
but I'm doing the best that I can.
I used to have a few friends
but they all had a charge sheet
with all these mates now in prison
I'm quite lonely out on the street.
Well I prob'ly could find me a brother
who will mess with the wrong company
who'll care whenever I'm lonesome
find it pleasure to love such as me.
Oh Lord it's hard to not grumble
when you're defect in every way
I can't bear to wait in the dole queue
cause it gets bloody longer each day.
So toe me and then shove me
and just see if I give a damn...
Oh Lord it's hard to not grumble
but I'm doing the best that I can.
I guess you could say I'm a stoner
a lowlife outcast rough and loud
Yeah I would have lots more friends if I washed too
but then I wouldn't have room in a crowd.
Some folks say that I'm just maniacal
hell, I don't even know what that means.
I guess it has something to do with the way
that I eat out of bins and make scenes.
Oh Lord it's hard to not grumble
when you're defect in every way
I can't bear to wait in the dole queue
cause it gets bloody longer each day.
So toe me and then shove me
and just see if I give a damn...
Oh Lord it's hard to not grumble
but I'm doing the best that I can.
Author notes
RECLUSE WRITER - Victoria, OZ
I heard this song and thought of the opposite side to the Big Star in his fancy room with everything.
MY PARODY OF THIS THOUGHT.
Title chosen...Oh Lord, It's hard to be Humble
Original Song and lyrics by Mac Davis
Link ~ http://www.pucksgrove.com/oh_lord.html
'Click' on ~ Click here to include music
Karaoke Style... Click here for midi Karaoke and wait for the intro to finish.
http://www.churchcorporate.com/Humble.html
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A contest entry
- Sing Me a Song ~ Write Me A Poem (More Songs Added) by pearl-dragon.
1750 points, ended November 18, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write Me a Parody by Judith Chandler.
525 points, ended December 8, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything goes. AUSSIE GROUP ONLY by Shelly Beattie 2.
700 points, ended February 12, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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A VERY GOOD PARODY
I do remember it in fact I have a copy of it, mind you also got a copy of The Oldest Swinger in Town love that kind of humour.
I did wonder why you reversed 'not to grumble' to 'to not grumble' I think it would flow better but maybe it's regional thing.
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Funny parody
. I don't quite remember all the original lyrics, mainly the chorus (always the sign of a good song).
Well done. **
Sincerely, Emmjay
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i have to give full marks for this one even though the rhythm is out a wee bit here and there. ***
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Much appreciated Bob
Not that I would prefer the life I depict here but I know I would not fit into the original song too well. Never get the earthy country outta this little black duck
Cheers
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very well done, great opposing parody of an old but rarely voiced song nowadays. sadly more and more people are finding themselves living on the street in these difficult times. best wishes to you. ***
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Thanks very much for your great comment and clappies.
Yes it is a sad situation for sure.
Linda
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Oh MY OH MY. This is totally awesome. EXCELLENT work Linda. Thanks for giving the contest a kick start.
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Thanks Janice...glad you enjoyed this one.
Hope there are many more in this and other Aussie contests in the future.
Go Aussies!!!
"HAPPY AUSTRALIA DAY TO ALL"
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Brilliant my friend, I especially like the room in a crowd bit. I was so pleased to hear from you, hope you are well. I've been here a bit more... it's like a cosy shoe!
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Thanks Liz
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I know I've already given a comment on this one, but just thought I'd let you know that it's still as funny, no matter how many times I read it Best of luck Cuz
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Well penned. Love the last verse!
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Thanks Joyce...I try to get my view across wherever I can and this one
I am pleased with.
Linda
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Fantastic!!!
Fun, humorous & very endearing...
Great narrative, rhythm, rhyme & flow...
Made me smile throughout...
Well penned, well versed, well done!!!
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Thanks for words in your comment (your entry left me speechless
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Pleased you enjoyed my version of the song.
Cheers
Linda
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No probs, it was my pleasure...
Have a great day...
Take care,
Fritz.............
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Absolutely wonderful use of voice! Brilliant! I especially like all the detail you paid in your author's notes. I greatly appreciate it.
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Thank you verrry much...this is one of my favs I have done and pleased
it was one you enjoyed. Great Contest!
I wish you well with it
Linda
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Well well well. I remember the song quite well, the original one, that is, and enjoyed hearing it on the radio. This is a very good parody on it, very good indeed and a worthy winner of its trophies.
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Thank you Bob...I guess I have had the itch for a little while
...written shortly after moving HERE 
I am hoping this one is on it's way to being up there with other parodies. (Got the singer lined up)
Much appreciated comment ands
Linda
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This is hilarious and an awesome read. I would recommend it to anyone, especially if they are feeling down in the dumps so to speak. Great work!
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Thanks
My aim is to cheer up the lost
Linda
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Great write!
This is really funny you did a great job! The flow is fantastic and just the whole concept of this is really interesting. hahaha I know that tons of people in bad cases have all "grumbled" at the lord and the fact that you have made that a funny thing is amazing. Great write and good luck!
Sincerly,
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Gotta get a laugh outta life where ya can
Best wishes for your contest
Linda
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I really enjoyed reading this and found it very funny, quite lively.
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Thanks...sorry I goofed and entered one over 30 lines...was going to change but see you have closed contest.
Linda
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Congrats on the GOLD !
I knew this one would be a winner Cuz
Well done on this BRILLIANT MASTERPIECE
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I am in awe of your ability to parody songs so well. This is one of my husband's favourite songs to sing along to but now he'll be using your words I think. Very cleverly done and when you read along to the music it is a perfect fit. Thank you for your entry and Good Luck.
Margaret
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Thanks for the great revue of this one...it was fun to do and hope the opposing message got through to all who read it.
Linda
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Excellent
I think this is an excellent parody of the original. I like your chorus in particular. Fun to read but I think there's a more serious underlying theme. Congratulations ad I hope you do well in the competition
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Thanks...and yes there is an undercurrent to this one as with most of my parodies. Pleased you picked up on it and took the time to comment. Clappies much appreciated
Linda
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This was a great poem. Good rhyming. Nice job!
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haha, I love this! A great parody on the Mac Davis original. Very well done. This is a thoroughly enjoyable read.
Rory
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Thanks...flip side to Stardom etc. Pleased you enjoyed the read Rory and hope you sang along with it!
Linda
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I do believe that you have nailed another one here! Should do better than the original
The Mister
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Blushing here...I wish I knew just how to get this one out there babe as I am sure there are lots who would relate to it
The Missus
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Oh gifted one this is just Parody Perfect!
street urchins everywhere now have their
very own song!!!
Doc.
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I changed it a little this morning to
'lowlife outcast rough and loud' (inspiration before cuppa) I think I have found my niche
Anything I can do for the underdog!!!
Linny
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Yep...you've done it again. You are the Queen of Parody in my opinion
I even reckon that yours is BETTER than the origional Well done and best of luck in this contest 
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Well Tnanks be to ya oh Queen of Music..I shall take that compliment and run like the wind with it
MWAH
Queenie Cuz
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