As i look at the sky,
wondering if you'll ever come back.
i count the stars waiting,
as the day turns black.
The moon comes full
like this feeling in me.
i miss that way
you told me.
how i made the world go around,
in the beauty inside of you.
if counted up to a million stars.
wanting to be exactly were you are.
cause the beauty you left is fading away
one that i would want to stay.
but if you must let me go
go far away cause i wont let you go.
i hold you, need you close to me,
while i wait for you to answer me.
if you'll ever come back by my sight
while the sun comes and the black turns white.
What did you think?
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but if you must let me go
go far away cause i wont let you go.
i hold you, need you close to me,
while i wait for you to answer me.
the whole poem was really great and it was very romantic the only thing that felt a littlw forces where these four lines, while I truley belive that as long as something comes from the heart it is perfect I dont know it was just something about those lines threw me off a little bit Otherwise I really enjoyed it!
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