I was only six years old
As i watched him die infront of me
I remember it was raining and very cold
I wondered how could this be
I sat on his lap
I started to cry
This was my pap
He was about to die
I was the last to hug him
I was the first one that cryed
Everyone loved him
I watched as he died
To this day
He's been with me forever
He will lead me they way
Threw my life forever
Author notes
I loved him very much and he means alot to me. The whole story is very sad to hear too.
A contest entry
- November New Member Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended December 7, 2007, 83 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do you remember a loved one?
Comments
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Thanks for entering
A very sad write. It touches me deeply to think you had to bear this pain at such a tender age.
Good luck - let the ink flow and your fingers dance
Rosemary -
Welcome to All Poetry
Oh what a truky sad write
and I know he will lead the way for you through life helping to make the choices you need to make.
A most tragic, heartfelt poem that has such strong emotion in it.
Thank you so much for sharing this in our contest
Gaylene
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Welcome to AllPoetry
G'Day rymanrocks
♥
What a write.
I am sorry you had to see your Pa pass at such a young age. He is with you, guiding you through life and it's paths.
Beautifully penned.
Thank you for your entry
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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