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[ Behind these Smiles ]

Behind these Smiles

and Shy-full eyes their

Lye's a fragile soul that

wants to cry

She smile and hugs

everyone around her not

letting them she a fearful

stager

She screams and crys

but shows no doubt

Shes reaching out for someone

to help her

but they only see what lye's

before her

So she smiles and laughs to

show what shes not

But she cuts at night

because of this plot

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  • KrizzAaron
    November 15, 2007
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    Nice work

    This describes a very close friend of mine, im abolutly sure she'd agree with me on this...good job


  • LoveIsSuicide21694
    November 14, 2007
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    i love this this is me... this is what i go through

  • Riot-girl-soph
    November 14, 2007
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    this poem is me......I'm sure it is, its how i was/am...I love it. fantasic-