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Callous

I know now, that I will never be able
to bring out the best in my partner.
I've learned that I don't have the
sentiments it takes to do so.

I've come to understand that my sorrow seeps out
when I least expect it,
and that it causes me to act brashly.
I make foolish decisions and wallow in them.

I start thinking a new life is the answer.
I confuse myself unintentionally, I think.

I find myself staring in mirrors,
illogically thinking the answer
will be written on my forehead.

I smoke until my lungs distress.
I let my cruelty ride until
my life goes into lock down.


The dream is gone.


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  • daffodilblossom
    February 9, 2008
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    nice stanza

    i enjoyed this


  • jo-el
    November 15, 2007
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    nice look into your thought life. really liked second and 3rd stanzas. cool