Another's lips
intensely kissing
scar's deformity,
exploding
from affection's earthquake.
Floating
awe's clouds,
learning love
sees only beauty
to arouse.
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Prompt
Twenty words - only - expressing the ecstasy of powerful love...
A contest entry
- The Rapturous Twenty by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended December 2, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ahhh, very potently powerful, thanks for your entry
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Beautiful
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WOW!!!!!! What a read this one is! Soo much said in sooo few words!! I love it!!!
Best of luck to you in this contest!!!
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