~D~
Purple clouds gather in the skies of yearning.
As my pulsating loins throb in anticipation
of your love.
I am overwhelmed by the
sensual showers of passion streaming down
from my raingoddess.
She baptize my flaming soul with the illumination of her radiant touch.
My body quivers like the quaking of a violent volcano.
Aroused by the heat of her devastating power.
~R~
Together we shower in the raindrops of our desire.
Our bodies begin to dance to the music that we make,
Our hearts beating to the same tempo.
Exploring each other with no inhibition, touching, caressing,
kissing, no holding back.
Hungrily tasting, licking at the fiery passion,
making the fire even brighter.
~D~
The fervent coals of love smolder within us
as our bodies unite in lusty interludes of fascination.
Tango'ing to the sensuous vibrations erupting
deep within the core of our wonton needs.
Our lips of delicious savor ecstasy with each touch
as we wrestle and rave like ravenous wolves
in the fields of erotic hysteria.
~R~
Let’s ride the waves of our fever, drinking in our adventure.
Intoxicated from indulging in the spirits of lust,
sweeter then any wine that can be found on any shelf.
Our love making, slow, soft and smooth,
turns to a frenzy of wild hard rough intimacy.
A longing, that neither has the power to fight.
A contest entry
- Expressing Your True Sensuality~ by poet2angels.
625 points, ended November 18, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great piece of collaborating here. Not my type of writing but I can appreciate the skill that it took to put this down. Love the imagery in this as well. The two of you work well together. Well done indeed.
All the best
Wayne
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Magnificent.......and heartfelt. Erotic...and very sexy........!!!!
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How passionate was this. Great Collab. The flow was great. Both of you did a great job. You deserved a "Trophy" for this one
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Beautifully written with sensuality and emotion
Lynda;f
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"She baptize my flaming soul with the illumination of her radiant touch"
I just love that line, don't get me wrong, I truly love your whole piece, but for some reason that line touched me.
"Let’s ride the waves of our fever, drinking in our adventure"
LoL, love that too,
Ohhhh Hell I love the whole remarkable piece.
Excellent job...
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Fabulous write.......she did this so welll
really used her feminine deep voice and made us all so
proud to be women...to have the senuous desires that
she described so well that fill our lives with such
JOY! GREAT GREAT WRITE....
you inspire us! that was just fantastic!!!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : ))
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Hot! Hot! Hot! I just love it!...novy
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Oh I loved this....This was tight! Sexy sensual and erotic! You guys did a wonderful job on this! Keep Writing! Commenting for the group
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Wow! Both of done a magnificent job. This poem is sweet, sexy, loving and pure passion. I enjoy each and every word....This read ROCKS! so beautifully soft yet direct, metaphorically wonderful...write on Rain & darell..................novy
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Well alright...Rain
so, about those waves
I loved this...another favorite I'd say by you.
Great job, you have so much passion in this that carries to your sensuality. I loved it
Phiff
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Fantastic!
This is some great writing raingoddess.
We make an awesome team. I could feel the
intense passion we share within this marvelous poem.
Love passion and romance is the spice of life.
I'm delighted that we both have an ample supply.
Much love to you my passionate lady of sensuality.
Bravo on a job well done!
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