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Gravity

Restraint
suffered set backs
relax
to lulling pull.

Skin
crawls
creeping
closer still 'til

arcing spark
illuminates love;

eliminating longing.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 15, 2007

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    Wow, believe it or not, hahaha I had to recapture my breath hahahaa this is so good. Thanks for entering it into my contest


  • ellipsist
    November 14, 2007
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    rapturous indeed!