Just you and me baby forever
locked in each others arms
as we kiss and make magic
in splendorous love!
A contest entry
- The Rapturous Twenty by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended December 2, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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That just about says it all. I really don't see how anyone could ask for a more romantic declaration of love in so few words. You covered the important things...kissing, making love and forever...just magic. Best wishes in the contest.
Margaret
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Locked in, eh? thanks for your entry into my contest
locked in is a lovely path to pursue
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short tempting you
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wow. this is really good. Short and sweet! I love it! you did a wonderful job expression this feeling in only a few lines! keep up your good work! and best of luck in the contest!
Crimson -
awww
I love this quickie
Beautiful and full of Passion
Ephiphany
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