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Makes Me Wonder

All you ever do is make me wonder,
every single day,
every single minute.
You leave me breathless,
wanting more,
and I just wonder what you're thinking,
what you're doing at that exact moment.
All you ever do is make me wonder,
I can't help but wonder what you're thinking right now,
what you're doing,
who you're with.
You make me wonder,
and I can't help but fall in love with your mysterious side.
All you ever do is make me wonder,
how much will I have to wait for you?
How much will I have to wish for you,
want you?
I can't help but dream of you,
every single night.
I just wonder where you're at,
who you're with,
and what you're doing with them.
All you ever do is make me wonder,
when is that going to stop,
when are you going to tell me that you love me,
or will that be never?
Because,
I love you so much,
and though I love you're mysterious side,
I can't help but wonder what I'm missing out on.

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Makes Me Wonder by Maroon 5.

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  • Beating gold member
    November 15, 2007

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    Oh Maroon 5. That's a good band!
    First off, I think you should read this through, because there are a few spelling/typing errors, that a spell check might not get.
    Other than that, I love the feeling that come from your poem. It gives thoughts and emotions that I think most of can relate to, and I like that you described it in your own way - not the usual clicheed one. Good job!