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Black And White

I'm going all the way.

All the way over the edge.

Fighting you back.

Slipping away.

Away into the black.

 

 

You haunt me.

My every step.

Putting me down.

Minimizing me to nothing.

There's nothing to gain.

And there's nothing left.

 

 

The pain encased inside.

It's starting to flare.

Flames fanned.

Igniting the rage inside.

And it simmers.

Fadeing down to hopelessness.

 

Lost inside myself.

Inside black and white.

No fight left.

No will to grasp.

Left to nothing.

And nothing left.

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I have issues right now...so i'm sorry...I guess I don't know what I think anymore

Just say it.....whatever it is on your mind

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  • x--nocturnia--x
    January 19, 2008

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    Woooooooooow (extended -wow-) THis is GREAT!!! I love the words you used, and it's so expressive, and it's so PRETTY! And so hurt, and I can relate, mostly in the past, but even now.... and the form, the way it fits/works together... wicked write curly

    Also, a sick background....


    • irishmidnight
      February 4, 2008
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      Satanic-faery

      **laughs** why thank you my love. **winks** It twas an interesting write to say the least. And I LOVE my background...you can find pics like this on photobucket.com...**bats eyelashes**


  • Sweeney
    November 17, 2007

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    I like this one baby. Its reminds me of just how very alike and different we are. It also reminds me of how much deeper we both feel than what we will often find ourselves able to express in spoken word. I love you and remember its never too late and I am here lover.

    • irishmidnight
      November 18, 2007
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      Brandon

      I try not to forget that it's never too late...but these days it's hard to hold onto that thought...but then...just as I am about to break...you say just the right thing at just the right time...


  • sweet nightmares
    November 16, 2007
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    nice rhythm. luvd the wording.

  • Justin3
    November 15, 2007

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    I'm not usually a fan of these kind of poems but I am a great fan of honesty and it seems that this poem has been wrenched from the heart and it is wonderful to see and read.Keep it up!

    • irishmidnight
      November 15, 2007
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      Justin3

      Thanks for taking the time to read this...and it is wretched from the soul...**smiles shyly** thanks again...it means alot to me knowing it got your attention


  • HaleyMary
    November 14, 2007

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    Very powerful write. It made me think of how I've been feeling recently about life and the world. Sometimes I look at the world and all the greed and war and sadness and pain and I almost feel like I have lost a sense of hope, though I don't want that for the world. Thanks for sharing this piece. Keep writing.


  • irishxrose
    November 13, 2007
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    Amazing as usual darling... I like it a lot... love you.


  • Sean Logue
    November 13, 2007
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    Excellent.

    I like this a lot, bloody well written.

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