I know that somewhere
deep inside you,
You don't want to leave me
but you think it is what's best.
I think you're wrong.
If that's the path
you choose to take,
don't think I'll be missing you
because I know it hurts when I say it
but I can go on living with or without you.
I am not scared to be alone.
But if you decided you want to come back to me
I will gladly take you.
Just don't think that I can't
do anything without you.
Because you're wrong.
Author notes
Famous Last Words - My Chemical Romance
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Comments
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I love that song! It's so good!
The poem is great and I think the anger is good, but sometimes it feels a bit like a naiv anger, if that's even a word. But it's only at few places. Other than that, I think the feelings in this come out really good. Good job! -
Well I love the song. It could be just the rep of the song but the poem seemed a bit disjointed..Not trying to degrade your work. I love the message. It just doesn't click with me.
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YESSSS les your favorite song is by MCR!!!! MY FAVORITE BAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry had a freak out moment. lol!
anyway i like this. well written. its kind of inyour face and i dont take shit. hehe. i like.
your little sis
Abby
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