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Love's Favorite Snapshot

Running along a moonlit beach
Gasping in the crisp air
With you in hot pursuit
Collapsing in hysterical laughter together...

A contest entry

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  • tarcus
    September 22, 2008
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    A very powerful emotive rendition in so few words describing an excellant time.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 15, 2007

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    I almost felt like I was right there, right now, that's the power of a poet's pen, thanks for this delicious entry into my contestlol