Simplicity unclothed,
glitterless divinity
Vulnerability...
for the world to see
Treasures gathered near or apart,
then stored in the heart
Author notes
Twenty words - only - expressing the ecstacy of powerful love...
A contest entry
- The Rapturous Twenty by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended December 2, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sensual and beautiful, much like your heart...thank you for sharing, best to you in the contest~blessings always~
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Ahh, so good, thanks for this entry into my contest
lol
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Twenty beautiful words exposing the finest of inner purity. Well done. I did enjoy this very much. ~Pamela
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Beautiful write...I love the sensuality of this piece..
Best wishes with this entry...
Peace and many blessings
~A~
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Beautiful
And very intense with the simplicity of this pen...Our hearts speak loudly for all the world to hear and see...Great write here friend
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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