the way you look at me with your yade green eyes, that is what for me inspires.
when you sing to my songs your own way , thats what i just think is okay,
you inspire me with everything you do... whenn you sing , or just let your phone ring all day long, when you are here my life feels so long
OTHER VERSION OF my cat
you just lay around in the sun,an never move you lazy little bum,
you do whatever you want too,you are my pet i really love you...
when im sad you wipe away my tears,with your soft and shynie coat,
when i am sceared and frighten with fears,you cry with me till the end of your throat.
you stay by me on cold winter nights,sit on my lap and turn off the light
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under ~ Inspiration by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended December 6, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cats are great
I really like this. I think it would read better formated differently, but overall, very good 
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Good write
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shitty really bad good when did you write this craP???
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