You think you can play me,
but boy are you wrong.
I know your game and how you play it.
Don't think for a second
that I haven't met you before.
Different form, same crap.
In private you are the sweetest guy.
Holding, cuddling, kissing me.
It's nice.
But the second we leave that setting,
into your world and your friends
your true self comes out.
You call me names, to look like
the big man in front
of your stupid jock friends.
Treat me like dirt
because you think it helps
you look cool and fit in.
Well guess what baby!
You aren't anything.
Anyone can be cold and heartless
in front of their friends.
It takes a true man to show his feelings
for a girl he cares about
to the whole world.
And you honey, are not that man.
Your little game is over.
You lost.
You didn't know what you had
and because you like to play,
you screwed yourself.
Author notes
Baby,don't play any games with me because I am NOT your average girl.
A contest entry
- RUN before time runs out by warrior-eagle.
500 points, ended November 16, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Wow, I can even feel pain in this piece and it has lots of emotion in it. You did great and I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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awwwwwwwwwww no one deserves to be played ,,, you did great job in this thanks for sharing
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niiice.
again scampie liked it. and so did i. its got this, dont fuck with me sort of mood to it. well done!!
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I LOVE this. I absolutely love this. if I was to close te contest now this would be gold, we will see as I get other entries. This was wonderfully written and I've said such things myself, I couldn't have written it better myself. Great work.I cannot say I liked a specific part because I enjoyed the whole poem. Wonderful.
...Simply Me♥
P.S I'll keep this in mind when I am judging. -
The prompt is:
Baby,don't play any games with me because I am NOT your average girl.
By Me.
---Please put the prompt in your author's note.Thank you.
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