Scott,
many have tried to break us,
few have almost suceeded,
but knowing you, and knowing me,
we never could be defeated.
I read to you a poem,
of a love so long ago,
and yet, a quilt of love for him,
for only you, I did sew.
together now, we'll be,
together now forever,
and although they frown upon us,
we surely know much better.
Love has never been something to define,
but truly, we love each other,
And I for one, will do so forever,
Lets leave the defining to another.
I love you.
Author notes
This is for my Scott. Man, am I head over heals.
My ScottieDogg, from his AllieCatt
I love you.
Might need some tweaking if we ever get married.
bon apetit!
A contest entry
- Wedding Vows. by Expression.
525 points, ended February 14, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - weddings by tony yates.
600 points, ended March 12, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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warm and personal
i like the approach of this poem, well done and thank you -
Aww this is beautiful and very sweet...btw cute and creative with ur names for each other
...i enjoyed this .
thank you for entering and good luck
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you have a lucky man to have a lady write him something like this. Very nicely done and best wishes to the both of yu,
Evan
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Great!!
This was such a sweet write. There is some one out there for everyone and if you have found him that is awesome . Love is Great!!! I have wrote something like this for my husband and it called define my love reminds me of something like this ..... -
It's such a wonderful feeling when you
find someone that makes you feel like
this all of the time. I do hope that
this relationship that you share lasts
a lifetime. Congratulations to the
both of you and good luck in your future!
Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful
piece with us all here! Keep up the
wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826 -
Nicely written. I don't think it needs much tweaking, it is fine the way it is.
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nice write. I enjoy rhyme and this is pretty good. Romantic and filled with love that the reader can feel. Thanks for sharing with the group.
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Awww this is truly an amazing poem you have here. I loved it and am so glad that you have someone that seems to fill you with so much love & happiness. You did a fantastic job with this poem and I look forward to reading so much more from you. God bless you and Scott always and I hope you have a very wonderful & Merry Christmas this year.
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Damn good
Yes as the Verdict thing says damn good, this is probably my most favourite poem so far, I feel, when I read it that it speaks the truth of how much you love me n' are wanting me as much as I want you, in a non-sexual way, just to be able to lay next to you n' see your smiling face. I'm not real good with reviews so I'll leave it at that.
Love,
Your Scottie-dogg Brain Drained Redneck Punk -
Thank you for sharing, best to you in the contest
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How very adorable!
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This is a great poem.
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