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Together forever

Honey,
I can't believe it,
Our love is neverending,
like a chain that runs through our hearts,
now,
finally,
I get to say those words,
That I have longed to say,
I will look you in the eyes and say
"I do"
becuase every minute without you,
is a minute lost of our love.
Baby,
We will be together forever,
and not a day less.

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Im actually engaged to the most wonderful guy, so this goes out to him

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  • j i n gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    Please read contest page again.
    I've actually never had to DQ someone for not following the rules.
    Even though this is a lovely poem and Im happy for you, Im so not looking for poems about love.
    Thanks anyway,
    Jin


  • Babisgal
    November 13, 2007
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    Thank you for sharing, best to you in the contest


  • Marctheman
    November 13, 2007

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    well, i guess you ready to make it official hm, i love your writing lately they all fill with emotions and true feeling, i wish you all the best in the contest.


    • joleahe
      November 13, 2007
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      yep its official...thank you for the wonderful comment

  • Gods-Artgal
    November 13, 2007
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    This is a great poem.

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