Honey,
I will wait for you,
we cant be together yet,
but in the future,
we will be together everyday.
In truth we are together now,
in mind and heart.
I love you,
and I cant wait till the first day,
of forever with you.
People say the distance is what matters,
to us it doesnt,
we might not get to touch physically,
but we touch emotionally,
such a strong emotion is love.
so strong is my love for you,
I will say forever "I do"
Author notes
Wait for you by Elliot Yamin
A contest entry
- You Favourite Song by Beating.
300 points, ended November 27, 2007, 18 entries
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nice job!!! i like the song yes and your poem was a sweet way to add a little touch to it. great job and good luck in the contest!!
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first off, let me just say that I love that song. So beautiful!
Second, I love that part about waiting for the first day of forever. that's so epic and sweet.
The poem is very short, but I think that's its charm. Saying so much in so short. Good job! -
This is really good... I'm currently in a long distance relationship and your poem describes everything perfectly.
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well thank you, im in a long distance relationship which is why i wrote this poem..im engaged to him so yeah i tried to capture that
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