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I Love You

I told you that I'm not good with all this love stuff,
but you'll never know how much you mean to me,
no words can express how much you have changed my life,
you dont know this yet, but I was doing a lot of stupid shit
before i met you,
but i am trying to stop,
for you,
I dont want to see you hurting,
i dont want to see you cry,
you mean the world to me,
and it kills me to know that
you are hurting,
I know you have problems,
dont we all?
I mean, everyone has things they have to deal with,
but no one else has me to cling on to,
no one else I mean NO ONE, only you,
you have my heart and im not going anywhere,
I love you, babygirl,
I love you more than you will ever know



now you cant say that i never wrote anything about you

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 21, 2008
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    oops wrong emote.
    LOL.


  • Blooming Poet
    April 21, 2008
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  • Roseycheeks15
    November 23, 2007
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    I really like this poem!

  • Roseycheeks15
    November 20, 2007

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    aww

    That was a good poem. It looks like you really love the girl if you are giving up stuff. Well good luck in the contest!


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    November 20, 2007
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    nice.


  • look for tomorrow
    November 14, 2007
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    thanks i really didnt mean it to be so poemish but it just came out that way


  • MelissaLynn
    November 14, 2007
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    this is really good and i know what you mean.


  • look for tomorrow
    November 13, 2007
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    thanks, i didnt really expect it to turn out like a poem, but i guess it did


  • look for tomorrow
    November 13, 2007
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    now i mean it, dont be sorry, i wont deal with it, i love you, you know that, you have nothing to be sorry for


  • -CrimsonTears-
    November 13, 2007
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    i'm so sorry

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