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Of Transience and Permanence




One day,
the pessimists say,
this place

This community,
of sawgrass shacks,
will get swept away

With further 'upscaling'
development

Just as we've ebbed away
at the Everglades


To those, may I say,
"So be it;
come what may."

Though truly I'd sacrifice
anything for the land
to stay

Sooner or later,
(the latter, I pray for)
inevitability will reign

Hearts will go
as they came

But for now,
I am here;
I write

Photographing,
over and over, the
same birds in flight

The same trees,
in 365 golden views,
from windows, open like these.

Someday, this place,
this precious history
shall remain with me

With us,
a priceless memory
that cannot be replicated.


II

Perhaps we will make
a grand spectacle;
hold hands and lie
across the sands of time

Kissing the limestone
at the crime scene,
leaving pieces of our souls

Until they sweep us away
as dusty stories,
as smoke
in glory.

 

 

 

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  • Eric Marsh
    2 days ago
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    mm an excellent social commentary written with you usual passion and skill..and yes you are correct we are destroying eveyrthing in our crazy rush to create more and more wealth...nice write..time for a joint..take care ..eric


  • XXCrimsonRaineXX
    January 12, 2008

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    pretty. i really enjoyed reading this. it flows very well. and it makes me think. excellent write. good luck in the contest!


  • Simply Simple
    December 6, 2007

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    This poem definately gives one something to think about. I will be back with more to say I'm sure. Best of Luck.

    ~It definately reminds one of how we destroy such beauty for another walmart or maybe a Target. It's sickening. Thank you for giving the world something to think about.


  • h e a r t s
    November 18, 2007
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    wonderful

    this poem makes me think of how they are destroying our beautiful foliage all around my home. ripping down trees and forests and displacing thousands of animals jsut so they can put up the 50th walmart and maybe a bank. it hurts, and i hate what we do to our beatiful world


  • michichoeret
    November 13, 2007
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    great write

    and so terribly depressing


  • Blueskywonder
    November 13, 2007

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    This is an excellent piece of poetry holding so much depth to its intriguing... thought provoking content.

    imagery is vivid... so to its meaningful expression.

    We all will be washed away whether it be tides of water or time.

    This is a great piece!

    Excellent

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