A patch of Earth
without trees
rivers
without water
people
with no shelter
Baked in the Morning Sun
dried bones
no burial
Wind blown Memories...
Author notes
Death came slowly along with the parched lands...only fake history to say I'm sorry~
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The spirits of these brave people still hover over the land. Their voices not stilled by the inhumanity of the times.
A sad, painful piece.
Dee, Mystic Soul
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This is powerful.
I am moved by this big small poem....a poem of greatness with so few words.
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A well written tribute about the past of your people.I have intented to read about the "Trail of Tears",a very black page of America's history.They compare it with the concentration-camps,actually it was! My favorite line:"Baked in the Morning Sun, dried bones, no burial, Wind blown Memories...".It says it all, I feel sad about it,every human has the right of his burial.Sincerely
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nevel69
Niaish my friend for your kind words and your understanding...!
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These are stories to be passed down and recorded.One generation to another. The natural beauty of the land destroyed, no burial..Everyone deserves that, and the buffalo stripped of their coats.Only white man would have such direspect.Forgive us for the sins of our forefathers, though mine were not here but I assume the sins of Canada and say it hurts my heart deeply.I pray cry with you, and pray you can forgive us
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Rose Angel
My Beautiful Rose,
No tears and no forgivness needed...if all had your beautiful heart this would never had happened in the first place...
~YOUR WARRIOR~
and your BROTHER
BLACK CROW
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What can you do with the pain you hold inside you for your family of long ago? Write what lies in your heart for others to read and understand.
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Frosty25
Niaish...and so I do
I am pleased for your kindness and understanding...
~YOUR WARRIOR~
BLACK CROW
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sad and beautiful writing here, painful almost. well done.
Abby
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Abby Apathy
niaish for your kindness...it does lay sad within my heart...pleased you enjoyed
~YOUR WARRIOR~
BLACK CROW
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Baked in the Morning Sun
dried bones
no burial
Wind blown Memories...
this poem is sad to me, memories of the past. one cannot change what happened then, no matter how one tries. I am truly sorry that life was like this and
I wish I could somehow change that. Great poem, very powerful.
Kathy
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Ms. kitty kat
Thank you dear daughter for your kind words and for understandingThey mean a lot to me...
~YOUR WARRIOR~
and Father
BLACK CROW
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Oh My Word!!
This grabbed and made the tears flow down valleys where I choked on the images
When I read the part: no water, no shelter
and no burial...
just saddened me...
This tugs at the Heartstrings
How can one take anything for granted
after inhaling this energy
The bones carry a message...
in the wind...and many stories told too
Thank You for sharing this Dear Friend
Best wishes to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Desire
My Beautiful Lotus Flower...niaish for your words and understanding. They mean alot!
~YOUR WARRIOR~
..and Spiritual Brother
BLACK CROW
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dried bones...
The bones of the dead gleam whitest in such a place... and the wind still talks to them.
Well done my friend. You express your sorrow well!
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arafura
I am honored my friend by your comment...Shadow Keeper to our Princess...You are correct, the winds continue to sing to the bones of our for Fathers laying upon Mother Earth...Niaish...
~YOUR WARRIOR~
BLACK CROW
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Such beauty and sadness drift through the pages entering a heart of a woman that is of the earth. My Cheyenne name Little White Wolf was given to me by Tender Wolf.
I cherish the name.. You are a warrior ant that will never change..it is truly in your blood.
Soulful Woman
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Soulful Woman
Beautiful Lady thank you kindly for the nice words...Little White Wolf fits you well love...Tender Wolf is our Cheyenne Princess...I have heard her speak of you...
~YOUR WARRIOR~
BLACK CROW
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I really enjoyed this piece my dear friend. I really liked the way you drew the images with your golden pen. Keep penning
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freespirit51
Niaish Little Wind and thank you for blowing across my page. I am honored you liked my words of truth
~YOUR WARRIOR~
BLACK CROW
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a lesson of long ago.
The old way of long ago and now the new ways will begin. You and I my warrior Brother can begin the new ways~ I cannot do it alone. I have a class to want to begin. But our spirit father told me soon My Blood brother of one of many tribes will walk beside me to help begin the old ways into the new ways. Are you the one Spirit father is senting to me? The one who will walk beside me? I have one book out cakked The Hertiage of the Native American My second book is called The old ways into the new ways As the Seven Nation come together. Give me your email and I will sent you the title. I have a few book of my first copy left. My new book should be out at the begining of the nEw ywar. Your Sister In peace and love of our People.
Morningstar Sparrow hawk walk wirh Bear
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Morningstar1948
The old ways my Sister still walk the plains of our people. They are the new just waiting to be born...I am a Dog Soldiar sworn to protect and honor...I walk only the path of truth...I stand in front and take the blows off our people...I am voice that those who do not see hears!
I have had many vision quest but still my path stays the same.
~YOUR WARRIOR~
BLACK CROW
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So sad...The forgotten bones of old....
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BlindSeeker
Niaish for the emotions you have left behind...It is truly sad to me
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SO VERY SAD
I have the pains that lay heavy in your heart...I see your words with the close of everyday...Fake History no truer words spoken...I care Black Crow!
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Tender wolf
MY PRINCESS...I am honored by your words...I do know we share the same heart and the same pain...Niaish my Love.
~YOUR WARRIOR FIRST~
BLACK CROW
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Dear Brother, Warrior, you speak right from the heart...the ugly truth we want to hide..It needs telling, and no one better than you to tell it..poet of love and compassion.....
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Rose Angel
Beautiful Rose,
Niaish for your words and tender compassion towards this Warrior
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history
And many sad memories. How do we ever overcome our inhumanity..
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BobFox
My friend I do not beleive it possible for man to change now. To much pain, war and hate...Niaish for your words of honor~
BLACK CROW
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This is so sad. You have the heart of a poet and you are very good at expressing emotion. The image in this read is very vivid and the flow is a fast hard hitting one. Well done!
Love,
Little Blue Star♥
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Amera
My Little Blue Star...your words honor me and soften this heart...Niaish for reading and understanding
~YOUR WARRIOR~
and UNCLE
BLACK CROW
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