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Black Noise

Hiding in the somber night
echos of black villainous cries
pierce my ears.

No sight of life
but voices creep near
with hostile revenge.

The wind seeds up
and the trees dance
of sinister life.

Can you hear the black?
Can you feel the noise?
It's right beside you
blackening your mind!

Lights flicker with hate
and shatter to Hells ground
surrounding my being.

It's you! I know it's you!
what contamination you are
that kills my morning light.

Why must you stain my life
of impure lies?
Why must you destroy
of ones optimistic?

The wind slows down
and the trees sleep
till morning rises.

No sight of life
but voices creep away
with dissatisfied revenge.

Hiding in the dawning light
echos of extinct black cries
that fade with the night.




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The sound of black.
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  • Crazy-Teddy666
    November 13, 2007
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    wow i like this alot keep it up