where is the sky,
when your head is hung low
towards the stream
of blood and pseudo-screams?
where is the high,
when your falling in
an endless line
for the american dream?
Please tell me what you think
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So many follow the leader, and when the leader doe snot know where he is going, it's like the blind leading the blind. Lots said in these few lines. Certainly food for thought here. Interesting title, liked the flow and the message shared in these lines.

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finally a poem that i agree with. the people of this country are turning into sheep. just go along with what the advertisments and people in suits tell them. no curiosity, or questions asked. brainwashed they are. the same thing is happening with the iraq war, music, global warming and especially religion, tis or nature to be a herd i suppose. great message could have been executed in a more intricate way but no matter.



