Shaded overcasts, the clouds slink across the sky
Blacken as if a crazed artist threw ink across the heavens
Yet with the promising darkness, an ominous omen
Let us ride the agitated wind in its furious love dance
Our infatuation will take us soaring
You are not as me, we are too contrasting they say
Could a vampire ever marry one such as the sun?
Night and day we are, but let us prove their thoughts faulty
But if our love was to go askew, like the torrent winds
Let it take us soaring back to where we came.
Author notes
PersuingHappyness
A contest entry
- Rule by the People round two by star wars fanatic.
450 points, ended March 24, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice! This was very unique and was not painfully obvious and literal. Wonderfully done and thx for entering so promptly.
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