In the waiting room for the “great reaper”
The old “Queen of Seduction”
meets
The ancient “Emperor of Courting”
Each had taken their number in the long line
Each is a “line respecting” person
Unlike the selfish folks that just cut in as they please
Two tired glances meet
Two knowing smiles
They move closer
And decide to use the waiting time by getting to know each other
A long in dept conversation
About everything that used to matter and may still matter
At least to us old weirdos
With the wrinkled lips
The ears hard of hearing
The slightly unfocussed eyes
The shaking hands caressing hanging old boobs
A last love.....
A contest entry
- Love me-like me-respect me-or bite me by plainoljoe.
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hm.. interesting
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this is like 'alice in wonderland' for us wrinklies love it good luck xx
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Goodness what apiece you constructed here.
Well done and best wishes to you.
Tory
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wow
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grat picure of the truth--I'll be in touch
Joe
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LMAO i am sure you will be
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tnx
why are you leaving? greener pastures? hope u found the perfect pasture. looked at your page. like your interests. be well - just don't be good that's boring
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