I see you tremble
are you afraid?
So different
And yet still the same.
I see you shakeing
Are you scared?
Two beating hearts
and one life Shared.
I see you standing
Are you walking away?
Please come back
I've got something to say.
I see you turning
Are you going to listen?
I start to speak
but the tears still Glisten.
I see you walking
Are you comeing back?
just remember, after all
Opposites attract.
Author notes
Long nights spent with your most obvious weekness
you start shaking at the thought
you are everything i want cause you are eveything im not
and we lay we lay together just not to close
how close is close enough ?
-Taking back sunday , make damn sure
Entry for conest based on these lyrics...not the best but i still like the poem...shouldnt have rhymed it but oh well
A contest entry
- *Let me occupy your mind* [As you do mine] by x dont.cry.out x.
400 points, ended December 19, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything by Shining for You.
700 points, ended November 17, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thanks
Thanks for the entry into the contest and good luck -
"Two beating hearts
and one life Shared."
I love those lines, and also the part about walking away. This is very well written, though there are a few spelling errors, like coming and shaking, where you put in an e. Other than that, great job! -
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hehe thank you and yeah i'm at school so its a bit distracting, i do things without thinking. I will go back through when i get a chance and correct them. Thanks again
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