Oh my love
please apologize me
as I maneuvered an ecstasy in your absence
I just could not halt myself
I tried my best to hold my core
the reminiscences of our last euphoria were
stinging me time and time again
I craved for you miserably to make love
but you were elsewhere
and this time I dipped into
the river of your remembrances
performing an ecstasy single handedly
Oh my love...
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by ennovy.
700 points, ended October 31, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I live with one beloved
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Lonely and love-lorn, temporarily at least. But, I can hear a promise there somewhere...sometimes you just have to take matters into your own hands.
Good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering.
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How lonely, emotional...with sweet desire in every word........Thank you for entering our contest...Novy & Brazos
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Why this begins with an apology, I do not quite understand, since you've taken this contest image and made what could have been crude, quite lovely and sensual...The desire for the beloved inspired the actions taken...well done. Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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very sensual, honest and cute.
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this is a really good love poem, very sensual, i can sense the heart beating in this one, this one is wrote with a lot of passions and love, i can feel the loneliness in it, and the want, this is just great, good luck in the contest.
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